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Sunday, December 19, 2010

The Rain

A bucket filled with chalk
Sitting on the front porch
Of the old brick house
A bucket filled with utensils
Used to draw their life together.

Did he ever see
These pictures on the sidewalk,
The memories that they crafted together,
While scraping their knees 
And stinging their hands,
These works of art 
Losing their color?
Losing their love?

She noticed the clouds were falling
Faster than they normally do
Breaking up quicker
Erasing something they drew.

The rain ran down
With more speed than ever.
It washed away the glimmer of the stars
On that warm summer night,
The color of his eyes 
As blue-enameled as the sky,
The swirls of color-
The rainbows of
 sweet happiness and pure love.
Her heart,
Once strong and brave,
Now fragile and cracked.
The rain swept it away,
Away from his hurtful hands.

6 comments:

  1. Nice poem! I really like the second paragraph, how you compared the drawings to memories. :D

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  2. I love the picture it paints in your head. I can just see all the colors running together when the rain comes.
    from noelle

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  3. Jackie, this poem is so good! I love your word choice. :)

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  4. Amazing! i love your detail and tying in the rain and art together. ^^ Great job.

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  5. This was a wonderful poem; it has left me with only one vocabulary word to offer you "wow."

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